Very good even tho it isnt finished. i met my bf on a game on the internet too and ive been with him for over a year now so dont let ur moms words hurt u =]

Awwww... this is so sweet. i have also a cyber angel more then an angel to me. i love the poem from beginng to end. truly an amazing piece. the flow was great. your words were prefect. what else can i say then you did amazing here.
5/5

TaKE CaRe,
Frenchy

Very nice ending 5/5 and thanks for ur comment on mine

You make your cyber angel sound like our Savior. That's not supposed to be a joke. :) I really liked this poem. You're right about your mother, she shouldn't be able to tell you who you should and should not talk to. But sometimes that's best. Have you heard of the girl who got kidnapped and murdered because she gave away details about herself to an older man? You have no idea how much insight people can get on you with just your name and where you live.

Anyway, this poem was lovely. :) I enjoyed it very much. 5/5!

Bri~