This was an amazing write. Fantastic job and other than one minute spelling mistake (shining not shinning) this was my favorite poem by you that I have read so far. You have a real talent and I think it is best displayed in these types of writes. Wonderful Job. Take Care, Kay

Kay,

Thank you for all your comments on my poems. I never take offense to anything anyone say's. We can all use constructive criticism. My writing comes in spurts. This format seems to work better for me than just simply keeping a journal. I believe we all have some sort of an emotional outlet, it is just a matter of finding it and then learning to express it. This is how I write. I am not looking to become the next T.S. Elliot I just want to express myself and put it out there for other people to see. Kind of my own little secret world type thing with a twist i guess. Please continue to read and give your input. I value all opinions.
Thanks,
Paul