This one is very different, very interesting though.

Such beauty in your sadness
Glassy blue eyes
Quivering ruby pout
A softness only pain can bring

this stanza is outstanding and also

You make me want to love you
Hold you
Immortalize you
With the tip of my pen

loved your imagination....very wild.. :)

all the best and take care

Jenn
What a wonderful piece. The imagery is awesome.

No ink
No colour
Could truly hold your form
It is selfish

These lines are so true...because how do you capture the beauty and love of a soul.

A want to preserve
Just one small piece
Something tangible
Beyond this body

Wonderful ending. I have really enjoyed reading this piece.
~Clapping~
(((hugs)))
Cindy

Such a deep and thought provoking write! Congrats on the win!

I love the images of the sadness, shadows and sketching.....how sometimes art is unable to capture the moment, capture the emotion we see with our eyes.....how vulnerable each of us is, so many feelings invoked with this one! Nicely done!

A beautifully penned piece. Vivid imagery. Congratulations on the contest win. It was well deserved!

Not what I though it was going to be about. Well done good imagry and word flow.

Congrats on the win Jenn !!!

A wonderful read, very deserving of the front pages.

No ink
No colour
Could truly hold your form
It is selfish
^^^
Loved this part !!!

This was absolutely breathtaking.

<A softness only pain can bring> this played out very well in my mind, and I can imagine how this must feel. The feelings you've employed are stupendous, and really a joy to read.

<A want to preserve
Just one small piece
Something tangible
Beyond this body> BEAUTIFUL! :) I loved that stanza. Something about it just sparked something inside me, and I felt like reading your poem twice. It's wonderful. Really, it is. :)

Bri~

Was completely mesmerised with this write....you captured and portrayed the vulnerability of sadness in a deep and profound way..wonderfully penned.

This one is so nice,it deserves winning