Comments : Just the Lonely Talking Again

  • 11 years ago

    by The Prince

    Wow, I'm so glad I came across this...

    I'm adding this to my favourites as you penned something that I've always wanted to. The atmosphere, your word choice, was all beautiful. It had magnificent cadence, and it flowed expertly from start to end.

    'Hesitantly, I stayed to fire those three little bullets:
    "I love you.." [But maybe that's just the lonely talking again..]'

    Excellent ending, nearly brought a tear to my eye...

    I'm nominating this.