Comments : They where

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    This is very touching. Sometimes we refuse the ones that are ready to comforts us when we are in needs, but that refuse doesn't comes from the heart, and with time we realize that these people means so much to us. The only thing is it's missing punctuations and a bit of re-edit, but i understand what you are trying to say. Keep on writing, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Starlight

    Understand exactly what you are talking about this was written very clearly :]

    5/5