I really likes this one alot.Seems like you have experianced this or something like this and if not either one of those you sure do kno how to capture attention and you really kno how to express your emotions.5/5

This is very so good, im sad because it sounds like something like this happened to you, but you really can write and express well. good job 5/5

but just one thing, you dont have to take my advice but im just throwing it out there: i felt that a couple of lines in this poem shud be broken up into 2 lines, but i still liked it.

Explosive and so full of emotions

So sad i thought this one captured the pain of having your heart broken very well. It was very well written also. i know how it is to get your heart broken and i hope you feel better. 5/5

~xcoryx~

Such a sad poem, beautifully written though. Every line drips with emotion. 5/5

This is so very touching...! The emotions and pain your expressing made me cry... Beautiful

This is so very touching...! The emotions and pain your expressing made me cry... Beautiful