I loved this piece. I have no certain critiques on any of them. Here is just an overall critique:
Word choice was phenomenal. I felt like I was there. And it was so flowy and beautiful. I just loved it.
The "alas my love..." part just caught my attention. It's been heard before but it's still very unique and original nice job.
The imagery. How do I sum it up, it took me into your mind and I loved it!
5/5

This poem was so beautifully written. The imagery was superb and the flow gently laid the reader amongst the words and emotion of the poem. The best part is that it captures the feeling bliss that love can give. Great write.

This poem was so beautifully written. The imagery was superb and the flow gently laid the reader amongst the words and emotion of the poem. The best part is that it captures the feeling bliss that love can give. Great write.

"Alas, my love, I will never be able to stop time
And hold you in my arms until the world's end
Until our souls fall apart, maybe we can pretend
That eternity will favour a paradise, so sublime "

Niceeeeeeee 5/5

"Alas, my love, I will never be able to stop time
And hold you in my arms until the world's end
Until our souls fall apart, maybe we can pretend
That eternity will favour a paradise, so sublime "

Niceeeeeeee 5/5