An everlasting tale in time that captures the heart of those that read this. 5/5, and took you long enough to write more. lol.

Nice work

Yes i forgot to put a comment on stranger part 2. I left this was more open. I loved the Line
"he listens to the whispering secrets of the wind" i'm so envious. I left some sympathy in stanza 8. also the ending is so (well i cant think a word for it) just incredible really.
"we will watch over everything
immortal we will live, until the day we die. I really wish i would have thought that for an ending to one of mine.

I'm glad there was a part two because it is stunning. I love the piece. I mean the story is so unusual but it was interesting. I love the imagery in both parts and I love the way that you worded this part. Everything just feels so... perfect. Fantastic job.