| This is a great poem it says alot very meaningful!!! 5/5 | 
by Kaila
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            I enjoyed this piece a lot. I did especially like the rhyming in this piece. It helped flow the story along well. One thing though is I wonder why you put question marks after questions but not after the end of each complete thought? It kind have threw me off. Overall nice poem and I enjoyed it | 
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            For one thing, I really enjoyed the opening line. Not just because it's a question, but it's kind of a rhetorical question at that. I couldn't think of an answer to it, and it doesn't seem like the narrator was either.  |