To make things feel better u have to let it in. dont force it away..

this poem is beautifully written and i love tghe flow. the lines are perfectly blended together.

5/5

ash[ley]

I love the flow of it... keep it up!! 5/5

I really like this poem! this one was written a lot like how write mine. you're a really great writer. it has so much emotion in it. please comment on mine...? "broken down road" and "beginnings" thank you. :)

I love this poem!!!! read any of mine??

Nice, its sounds to me that you are truly in love... I hope that you find your peace and happiness in life and in yourself.

This had wonderful flow.I think a lot of people can relate. I know I can. Beautiful piece of work hun.

Keep it up :)

The path of the enabler is a long road traveld.
I have been on both sides of that road.
But that road is vary thin with being supportive and the enabeler. good job. vary nice poem.

I love your first stanza! The second to last line "I'm not sinking slowly, honest" is one that I have said to myself many times. Its hard to let go when you know you have to hold someone else up.

Great piece, but that rope can eventually break and then what happens? you both drown? Honesty is the best bet you can still hold that person afloat but the effort must be 50-50 or else both of you will go down. Be strong, but make sure your not the one continuously having to be strong for both of you guys. Very great imagery and detail.

Wow. I love the style, the flow, the title and the words. Such an emotional piece.
I like the "If I'm to keep your head up too,
I can't allow myself to drown," it speaks for itself and shows the love you have to give to this person. 5/5, Em xx

Very well written.
And good luck with that one;
Sounds like you'll need it ..
5/5

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Ok AWWWWHHHH this is insainly amazing.
It makes me mad that the boy i loved decided to "drown".
it almost made me cry.
THAT IS SAYING SOMETHING! i dont usualy cry over poems, but the power and the love i felt in the lines was overwelming.
5outa5.
**bri

Brilliant write..5/5

This is beautiful!

"These tears are only reminders,
That you've been far away too long." - I think these two lines are extremely powerful and show an extraordinary amount of emotion.

Great write!