You have no idea how amazingly this relates to me and so many other girls in the world. especially during high school. you get this first love or for the first time you give your all to a person and then it gets ripped away. no matter how hard you try, you cant forget. everytime you see them it sends butterflies across your body, even if you start seeing someone else... the poem so beautifully sends a message that is universal and so many can feel the emotion you try to get across. its wonderful.

I think this is wonderful. Every girl in high school can relate to this one, seeing an ex and missing him.. you did a great job at explaining the confusing feelings in this kind of situation :)

OMG. I've just shed a tear lol. This was such a beautiful piece. 5/5, Em x