*Claps* you overcame your writers block with a bang! :] Awesome work.
Jeez, this was such an emotional piece, it was so intense. I like the structure that you used, it was unique and really well done. You pulled it off fabulously.
This really tugged at my heart strings, it was really well written and that helps lure the reader in i guess. This was really, a fantastic write.
Keep up the great work!
5/5

I loved teh stop on the first of the line , and the metaphore the dance figure and the stop all dancers fall , !!

but the depressing feeling you give to this figure , black roses for black times!! yes you are right ,

but i tell you after every storm there is sunshine again!

after every dark there is light jsut becasue the darkness can not exist without light and vise versa!

have faith dear , that tomrow the rose will drink the light again and change her color !
^_^
you have my vote definatly here
1^_^5/5

Black roses for black times. (too glommy)

Cheer it up, life is a reaction to our inside..

Well done; 5/5

I honestly love it bit by bit.

it is very dark but realistic and creative at the same time.haha

>>>good job!

=midz