Comments : The Quiet Screams The Truth

  • 15 years ago

    by Hologram

    Fuk, thats really good.
    I feel what yu are actually saying,
    I think this everyday, but yu just put it into a poem :)

    5/5

  • 14 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    I thought the title was excellent, and finding it again at the end of your poem was great.
    A bit confusing at first.. but following along you find the emotion put in there. I like the metaphors you put in, simple, but enough to give the image wanted
    keep writing ^^

    5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Alanis

    Love it <3