Comments : Alabastre Sand...

  • 15 years ago

    by benjamin

    I love this poem.. its great....i love the fact that you make the storms as if they were alive ..

  • 15 years ago

    by mandy

    Very eerie, it's gave me shivers, 5/5.

    -mandy :)

  • 15 years ago

    by Mr Anonymous

    Very nice rhyming, you've gotten really really good at it. Very nice flow, as well, great job!