Comments : No More Waiting

  • 15 years ago

    by ChaoticSchemer

    I dont know if this is how you feel, i know the majority of the people on here write poems about others and such, but if it means anything, i know exactly what you are going through, i have some scars that im not proud of. Serious ones. Stitches and such, and they were over men that treated me bad, for the most part, but if i could just say, men aren't worth hurting over, if they hurt you. i wish i could say that you learn from your mistakes. And i hope that one day you find peace with yourself, not to sound to hippyish. :D
    Take care lady! And remember, Keep smiling!!!
    Beautiful poem, written from the heart!

  • 15 years ago

    by Cara

    This is the best poem you have ever written in my opinion. Even though it is really sad, you put it together well and it made for an interesting read. Really well done.
    You are growing as a poet, even if what you write is depressing, you still write it very well.
    Keep up the great work.
    5/5