I understand how you feel. As we grow older everyone and everything we used to know seems to slip away.

I drink away my problems
But they never go away
Every bottle brings me closer
To the problems I betray

That stanza epitomizes the feeling that those who are depressed experience and the way it flowed worked perfectly. There are a few hiccoughs in the rhythm that could be changed to enhance the poetry rather than detract. For example in the first stanza last line, "all" is an extranneous syllable that really has no impact on what you're attempting to say. Other than a few rhythmical mistakes the poem is awesome and extremely heartfelt. The emotion is what drives the writing.

I was just venting in this 'piece of work'. Not really meant to be anything special.