Comments : It's Not Right, But It's Okay

  • 15 years ago

    by Ash

    That is such an amazing poem! Every word just captured me from the start and the feelings were there all the time. I didn't quite expect it to end that way.. So all I can say is that I'm totally blown away.

    "So out came the super glue and the tape,
    sitting down with my broken heart.
    With that stupid look of concentration
    on your face, you healed me, part by part."

    ^^ This stanza stuck out to me so much. It was almost picture perfect like an artist at their best work.

    Once again it wa amazing. Keep it up! 5/5 from Ash.

  • 15 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Interesting write, I found it to be an original write. The wording was well thought out and the way you delievered the ending was excellent in my opinion. Overall a nice write that holds emotion within. I am sure there are people whom can relate, nice work keep it up!

    Peace, Joe