Dude that poem was amazing! im adding it to my favorite list and there is only one other poem on my favorite list and its by Robert. The whole thing was just so darn vivid. You must have been in a really poetic mood to envision all that about the stars and such. I wish i could get back into feeling things or at least sensing things cause you seem to be feeling kind of numb too but the poems arent lacking. i think my favorite part of that one was the part about walking along the beach and getting pulled into the deepest part of the ocean. I could really picture it and it kinda goes to show that everything can be serene and in seconds your drowning in your own personal ocean. Awesome. Write more cause i really like checkin your page and just reading, especially because i can't enjoy my own anymore. see ya later

Wow.
this was seriously amazing. and the weird part is, some of the stuff you described in your poem was like how i was feeling yesterday.
well done.
:D
i really, really, liked this poem.
if i could, i'd rate it 10 but there isn't any. D:
but nice job, :) keep writing. !<3

And the thing is you are not alone in that own personal ocean of yours.

Depressing, yet this is one way of ridding the blues by sharing them and your descriptiveness certainly does that. A well worked poem that I thought I was not going to finish or enjoy but it drew me in and I shared your blues. 5/5 Ray S

I added this one to my favorites

Good poem. I loved the words and emotion you used 5/5