Comments : The Robin

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    Red breast bandit gathering seed
    Sowing Summer, tending weeds
    ^^^
    I love these 2 lines .... perhaps it is the feeling of sowing summer that makes me anxious and nestles happily in my thoughts.

    A wonderful read Deb, the flow is flawless and the imagery painted in colors of red and green.

  • 11 years ago

    by Twisted Heart

    Deb,

    Absolutely lovely, dear. Flowed well and imagery was wonderful. Can't really pick a favorite stanza as the whole poem was well written.

    Splendid job.

    Always,
    Jeannie

  • 11 years ago

    by Cindy

    Debbie
    What a beautiful piece to share with Spring right around the corner. You have painted such a vivid picture with your words. I feel like I'm there seeing it with you.
    Love Cindy

  • 11 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Articulate, clever word choice with impeccable flow. Great rhythm and unforced rhyme. A lovely read in my anticipation of the coming Spring! Excellent job!

  • 4 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello,
    I am a big fan of your sister's work, and it seems talent runs in the family!
    What a beautifully detailed and elegant piece this is that rhymes wonderfully! I love your use of alliteration throughout this write.
    Well done and all the very best
    Ben