Red breast bandit gathering seed
Sowing Summer, tending weeds
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I love these 2 lines .... perhaps it is the feeling of sowing summer that makes me anxious and nestles happily in my thoughts.

A wonderful read Deb, the flow is flawless and the imagery painted in colors of red and green.

Deb,

Absolutely lovely, dear. Flowed well and imagery was wonderful. Can't really pick a favorite stanza as the whole poem was well written.

Splendid job.

Always,
Jeannie

Debbie
What a beautiful piece to share with Spring right around the corner. You have painted such a vivid picture with your words. I feel like I'm there seeing it with you.
Love Cindy

Articulate, clever word choice with impeccable flow. Great rhythm and unforced rhyme. A lovely read in my anticipation of the coming Spring! Excellent job!

Hello,
I am a big fan of your sister's work, and it seems talent runs in the family!
What a beautifully detailed and elegant piece this is that rhymes wonderfully! I love your use of alliteration throughout this write.
Well done and all the very best
Ben