Amazing i love how it's flow's great job.

keep up the amazing wok;)

The last line.. wow it was amzing how you ended it

but seriously dont let it kill you. love comes and goes and you seem young so it will find you again. dont go searching for it. 5/5

Sometimes we can't stay away from danger or things we know we shouldn't go near, can we? By the time you realise, it's too late!
A good write, well done.
All the best
Ben