After i wipe my tears away i can write... I compeltey understand ur poem each time i was molested and raped i fought but he won... When he finshed he cleaned up and walked away. And bulllied me in front of my brothers. he was my cousin were both male... and that really messed me up

I give it a 5/5 i think its excellent so is ur other one as well

This is very sad.This also happens everyday and people live like this 24/7 so scared and cannot do much about it.Its sad and I feel for everyone who has been harmed in this way and others.I have never been raped molested or anything in this mannar but everyone kno I am always here. Love this great job.I loved every inch of this!! Wonderfully writtin!!!

-Kortney

I really like this poems you can express thing really good!

The idea is really tragic .. Like sadder than sad gets . There's some flow issues though , that can be easily revised . I really can't getter over the whole , raped to teach her to be straight though .. It provoques a powerful emotion . Really well done , 5/5 .

Wow thats not cool people cant change others and they shouldnt even try

It was writetn perfect i think. it really filled me with emotions. i have never experienced anything like that and i cant imagine what it must be like to fight the memories everyday. but i hope everyone that has stays strong. its never your fault.