Oh my god.
I loved this. It was written so beautifully. It flows so well. I can't get over this .
It's heaven on paper. even though it's not on paper. :P

amazing ! 5/5.

OMG, wow. I'm speechless. I love love loved this poem!!! I swear it's one of the best writes I've ever encountered and they are just a selective few. Yours made it on my top list. The story you spun in such a short poem, could tell of endless tales and sorrows. 5/5, in fact, I do reckon you deserve more but this is the highest the site allows me to award :P