Comments : Karma- What goes around, Comes Around

  • 14 years ago

    by Kittens Poems

    Eww-wee , This poem was well written, and I can really feel your pain. Good job, I'd hate to be on your bad side.

  • 14 years ago

    by Kianna

    Wow, harsh, i love it! keep up the awesome work!

  • 14 years ago

    by jescelle

    Harsh, but 4 good reason. a broken heart from the transformation of a close friend is as if they killed themselves and the suicide note read that YOU were the cause... a few minor tweaks could be made, not with the wording but the flow, since that was the style on display.. but all around i truely liked it and could feel every word... its not what the friend did, its how they made u feel...
    my fav part was the 2nd stanza
    "I laugh at your misery,
    And dance in your pain,
    I would swim in your tears,
    If I had something to gain."
    Quite an elegant display of confidence dispite heartache.. beautiful. 5/5!
    Jescelle