Wow absoluty fantabulous! i love long poems and i couldnt stop reading! xx

This is seriously amazing! This is deffinately one of my favorites, its not sad but it's almost....enlightening, makes me wonder what crayons taste like :P Keep up the amazing work :D

What a unique write.
It was long but I believe that it was well worth the read.
I love the story you tell. I didn't quite figure out and though it could be an imagination.
It was a delightful read but it had it's sad parts as well. great job

I LOVED your poem!! :] couldn't stop reading it. Good job!

Wowwwww i loved it

it was ammmmaaaazzziinngggggg
it was long but worth it :)

u have talent