WOW.Zahra.I think this was the poem you have ever written.It was really nice and the worda were so meningful...I really loved it...

Excellent sis..Keep it up..5\5...

Though it was just a glimpse
Not even intended me
The sight is unforgetful
A work of art to be

I love these lines :)

Very good flow , and your rhymes are quite nice too . I don't know why you have a lower rating on this one .. 5/5

It's creative and cute :) great job! i thought it was awesome!