Comments : Unintended {Contest}

  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This is really quite good.

    <Darling, don't fret; for I will be on my way soon,
    I'm picking up the pieces of my life before you.> I think these lines are my favorite. :) And I liked how at the end, you switched them around. :)

    Very well written! 5/5

    Bri~