Comments : La Ville

  • 11 years ago

    by Lu

    I read your poem on the main forums and just had to come leave a comment.

    Such sadness flows through your lines. Deep, heart impacting words expressed with ink filled tears.
    I will be sure to google it ...

    Great job on this touching piece!


  • 11 years ago

    by Faithless

    This is a sad write indeed and for the fact that it was based on a true story, the words you used to describe the tragic event really brings the tragedy to life.I really enjoyed it . keep it up