This was a great poem, and the only grammer mistake i noticed was you put "a angle," its "an angle," but yet still a beautiful poem non the less. Sorrow deep in the states of cataclismic truth of never ending and she apeals to the ultimate oneness has a divin rite that we has humans may never truely acheive the true understanding of a deaty. thats wut i got out of it. Profound, truely