Wow this poem is absolutely amazing...The title kindda draws me into the poem and I must say that this poem really live up to it's title. Though it is short, i can clearly read the message that you are trying to bridge across. It musta ben hard for you to have a miscarriage.

two heartbeats fade to one

-I can feel the as another life passed away, though this is a very sad situation, but you have describe death so gentlely.

Overall it's just brilliant