Stunning, Silvia!

What a beautiful poem and format also:)
I loved it:)
Succes on the contest!

*hugs*

5/5 Ingrid

Sylvia
What a beautiful piece you have penned. You did a awesome job on the form.
(((hugs)))
Cindy

Sylvia you have done a remarkable job with the form challenge. Your poem sounds so distinguished and beautiful bringing natures light into it. It's very profound. Great Job on the poem dear. Thank you again for help with mine.

A lovely poem Sylvia - I can't wait for spring to arrive!

I somehow find the nature poems too tough, portraying nature's beauty with words and making reader be there with u too and cherish is something i have been unable to do but i really love reading and admire. You really are a very talented writer, loved the poem.

all the best and take care

What a stunning nature poem. Its a feel good poem.. about one of the greatest things in the world. You really brought a smile to my face, such intense imagery you used!

Petals kissed by dew, glistening,
^^
Your opening line is beautiful. I have never heard that before, so congratulations on being totally unique. Petals kissed by dew. That is simply stunnig wording.

A really beautiful write Sylvia.
5/5

Lovely write Sylvia...
you ahve captured the beauty of nature so well... the imagery is so refreshing ... loved it...

keep writing :)

Sylvia..what a beautiful poem my dear =)
The opening line was very captivating and amazing.
I think I read about this form but I don't recall it is famous here on the site.
you did a wonderful job dear.
To tell the truth I never really enjoy a poem about nature, yea I know it's weird, I just don't find immense emotions in it..but this one.. you left me breathless =)

I have no criticism !
Write one.

Outstanding write sylvia, awesome flow, great wording. 5/5

"Petals kissed by dew, glistening,"
`Youve painted a very vivid image with such few words.. and isnt this ever gorgeous. I love how youve worded this, your word choice is flawless.. especically kissed, thats just absolutely breath-taking and gorgeously penned.

"Sunshine spreading warmth everywhere.
Flowers budding, blooming with flare."
`Your words bring warmth to the reader, and portray such vivid images.. great alliteration with "sunshine spreading" and "budding, blooming" so beautiful.. your words brought a smile to my face.. what a uplifting poem that speaks of a beautiful morning and the flowers blooming and glistening in the sun.. makes me think of spring and summer ;]

"As morning unfolds with suspense,
wonder fills my heart with delight,
and I know the world is alright.
Nature's beauty is so immense."
`Your last line is sooo powerful Sylvia! So very true, what a beautifully written poem.. I needed something uplifting to brighten my day and with such short words and vivid images of such nature I'm smiling. :]

Thanks for sharing.
Beautifully written, 5/5.