Not too bad of a poem.

In the first stanza, I thought there was a little too much "You did this, You did that, You did, You did, You did". I thought it really hurt the flow by seperating the lines from one though pattern into several very short, undescriptive lines.

I did think the rhyme scheme was very subtle though. I overlooked it the first time I read the poem, but picked it up the second time.

I did like the poem, but it seemed a little rough compared to your other poems.

NO your poem is fine how it is... As a poem its very good but sad that it happened to you... Thats so horrible