Comments : So Much Is Wrong

  • 15 years ago

    by DeepSoul

    One thing, this world isn't God-forsaken. I know that. God's the One that got me through, and the One who is continually by my side. He's here, we just have to seek Him out. There is a lot of hatred in this world, and I agree with you that I wish there was more peace.

  • 15 years ago

    by Aureus Argentum

    This is a very good write, Kiki. Very impressive questions that spark imagination and make you think. You did a great job. 5/5

    Bri~

  • 14 years ago

    by Andrew

    I think the message in this is marvelous, hope one day everybody might reason the way you did in this poem. Like it.