Wow .. thats just amazing .. great poem..
"Sit back and enjoy your comfortable life
With your three kids and your pretty wife
Ignore the mind-numbing indigent "swine"
Blind yourself with fancy wine " i love that stanza.. it shows that people are so inocent and dont know anything thats going on in this world.. this is definantly my favorite that ive read.. since i started writing

I like the repetition at the beginning . The imagery and wording is fantastic , and the few rhymes that are present really bring the flow together . I would normally break a poem down and tell you my suggestions , or lines that threw me off . Really well done . 5/5