Comments : Questionable Death

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I do not wish
    Some great reward
    Peace is all I seek

    Miracles
    Could live in death
    As surely they grace birth

    Loved the complete poem and the way it was written...very smooth pattern.
    Loved these two stanzas the most, awesome.

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    I do not wish
    Some great reward
    Peace is all I seek

    Miracles
    Could live in death
    As surely they grace birth

    Loved the complete poem and the way it was written...very smooth pattern.
    Loved these two stanzas the most, awesome.

    all the best and take care

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Jenn
    What a great poem. Love the imagery.

    I do not wish
    Some great reward
    Peace is all I seek

    THat is all one could hope for in death.

    Dancing free upon the wind
    Soaring
    To some peak

    Hopefully things will be this beautiful when we leave our earthly bodies.

    Back to nature
    Would suffice
    Sweet mother of this earth

    To be a part of natures beauty would be such a wonderful thing.

    Miracles
    Could live in death
    As surely they grace birth

    Love your ending. Hoping for one of the miricles.
    Take Care
    Cindy