Comments : Lurking in the shadows 2

  • 15 years ago

    by Blissful

    I'm sure many can relate with that emotion. Being surrounded by so many people yet feeling completely alone. Happiness is found within and not in people which is why you need to look for it in yourself before you can look for it in others. I liked how this was short and to the point because you said so much in not so many words which made it a joy to read. I liked what you did with the title. It was a more literal perspective which was interesting to see.

    Well done!
    *5/5*

    Bliss. [Beyond a Poet's Mind.]