Comments : McDonald's Daydream

  • 15 years ago

    by The Prince

    Lol!!

    'We will chill by the river nile
    Cause I know that it's all worthwhile'

    This poem made me laugh, dude. This was hilarious.

  • 15 years ago

    by kelleyana

    HAHAHA, waw, you puts a hugh smile on my face. Well azzza you are one of my favorite poet. You knew how to makes me laugh in this chilly morning, cheers, 5/5, kel.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    HA HA HA!

    Well...you never know Azzza!

    All great romances started with one hello, so just go for it, son!

    Hugs,

    5-5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Cute and humorous. Gave me my daily dose of smiles. Thanks. 5/5

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    Very Cute thanks for the laughs.

  • 15 years ago

    by NoUr

    Hehe, yeah that was cute...

  • 14 years ago

    by Katie

    Hahaha. I love this one. It would make a great song as well. Very nice. :) Thanks for the comment.

  • 14 years ago

    by John Long

    That first verse is a killer and it just gets better! Very good and very funny!

  • 14 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    HaHa... A really humourous write... I loved it! 5/5 for making us smile... :))

    Olwin.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    LOL you are amazing :-)