You made me smile. :]

This poem has alot of truth to it and i like it. i like how u have thought and come to these terms. i also like how this peom is written with the way u used to think to the new thought i love it. 5/5

:) That's my response. I read this and smiled.

Wow skye i was really enthralled by this piece.

I took a walk through my mind
(And a run through my heart)

^^^ Though this is a short stanza but it really stood out for me. I just love how you phrase it . This is brilliant

Another thing that i like was after the 3rd stanza, all of the scheme was A()B etc... I that was pretty unique. I like the idea, that you placed down your thoughts about inside the bracket before saying what you have discover etc...

I love how you end it it just completely make sense...though we don't like certain parts of our life(eg parents nagging at us), but as a whole it is a part and parcel of life that has been package for us.

Excellent Job
5/5