Lettong go of the person you love is hard

i like this poem its all happy till you get to the end. it makes you think tht u dnt know what u have till its gone. dont let love bring you down. stand up and face it.

5/5 very well written

Very descriptive and extreamly original in many ways. The only thing I really would've liked to see you use is punctuation. Punctuation is very important in poetry, it lets the reader know when to pause or stop as well as adding to the overall flow.

Overall a wonderful write, keep up the good work.

Peace, Joe

This is a truly heart felt poem. I like how you crafted it in sucha way that you introduce to the readers this care free character which is the total opposite of your character and how he made you feel on top of the world with his charisma and style. You have made the transitions smoothly from the both of you being a couple to him slowly letting u go. Sometimes it's just hard for us to let go this things that isn't made clear to us. You have done a magnificent job . keep it up

5/5

Funny enough. I love holy jeans and I draw, or sketch, whatever word you choose. I loved this poem, for so many fall in love like this po em says. To the point where we don't need to speak to tell our love. And we think it will never end, but normally that is how it is, ends befor it gets better, for it can't get better. 5/5 on the poem.
AJ
PS: thnx for the comment on Mirror, Mirror.