Comments : Sometimes

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    What a magnificently beautiful write. A very inspirational piece indeed. Lovely message that people should heed.

    Where our thoughts become virgin
    Undaunted by society
    It's like a fog that's lifted
    From life itself
    And for the first time ...................
    We're able to see

    ^^ Perfectly penned stanza in my opinion. Oft times people do not realize what they say or do and then sometimes its like the age of awareness when we reach that point and become so much more mature when we can realize what we have done or said. Magnificent penned piece here and very well done.

  • 15 years ago

    by Sylvia

    What a lovely write. Sometimes if we did these things, perhaps the world would be a better place and we would be better for it. Well done.