Well written. Especially liked the line :
"Like a diamond
You will shine forever
And you shall never be forgotten. "
Look forward to reading more.

Hmmmm... i like ur title it brought me in.. Like my poetry i love to write about the dark and unnatural... your poem has great potential.. but sometimes.. i cant find the rythm... the flow... the words that match that give it that extra HMPF!! i would ask of you to go back and maybe re think some of your words.. but the poem is quite nice and good now.. i only say this because it could become so much more then nice and good.. it could be great..

-Shadowlust-

Oh dear... its awesome poem... I love this poem... You are mindblowing poet, I like you writing style (5/5)

Wow, that was hot.