I love the flow of this piece Jeannie ... the words just sweep you away.

~ wipes tear ~ such a touching read Auntie !
Someday the smile will be full hun ... someday ~hugs~

That was just absolutely marvelous! So beautiful, Jeannie.

I loved the line...

<Inside the dawning of the day
You fade against the sun
But true you seem to follow me
At night when day is done.>

^^ that just took my breathe away, and as I read the rest of the poem... well, I was speechless. I don't know what to say, this poem was just so spectacular.

5/5

Bri~

I love the flow of this poem. Seems a very effortless writing. Wonderfully written lines... Nicely done!

Ahhh ... the hidden pleasures of escaping into our dreams. Nicely written.