Wow this is really well done. I've gone through this exact same problem and i know it isn't any fun :( The last line also left me speechless, perfect way to say so little that means so much. Keep up the great writing :) 5/5

Nice poem, i can really relate. Great flow. Keep it up. Shanik

Awww! I can't, this is just so sad but so sweet... I love it... I think a lot of people can relate to this.. Unrequited love is seriously hard and you've expressed it beautifully. Great job :)

Sweet but saddedning at the same time, I know the feeling. 5/5, Em