This is beautiful love
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Wow, powerful piece, it's a very emtional piece, i absolutely adore it. so full of raw emotions, tenderness, sadness. it was beautifully written,
your timing was very good, phrasing amazing, and word choice unbelievably good.
--lovedroughtmelody

Jenn what a sad write. So much emotion in and between your lines.

The words you said in anger,
Still play in my mind,
Not ready to hear I'm sorry,
So I'm leaving you behind.
^^^
Like the saying goes ... you can't take back words in anger after they've done the damage. And this expresses so well the feeling we get when the one we love ... hurts us with words.

Great write for the challenge Jenn !!!!!