Comments : Each New Day

  • 14 years ago

    by anand singh

    First let me say thank you for reading and commenting on my poem of faith.
    This si a wonderful piece and it shows the yearning for a relationship with our heavenly father.

    Wake up in the morning
    Thanking heaven i'm alive

    These two lines sum it all up my friend.Who do we have in heaven to thank?God it's who we have and, we shoild all thank him for sustaining us through the night.

    Didn't always use to be this way
    When my life took a dive.

    I've lived these two lines for a very long time my friend until I decide to get on my knees and ask his helping.

    I enjoy reading this piece and.You've done a good job with it, your rhyme scheme held up throughout.
    I will read more of your work as time permits.
    Paul...

  • 9 years ago

    by Rainbow Writers

    Well written poem!