Comments : Words (Loop Poetry Variation 1)

  • 15 years ago

    by Cindy

    Good job on this form Sylvia :)
    I will have to try this one day....if I get eager...LOL
    You do a really great job on the formed poetry.

  • 15 years ago

    by Ingrid

    Words are the lasting proof of our thoughts and our progress as a society as a whole..so indeed: bring them back!

    Lovely poem, Silvia dear:)

    *hugs*

    5/5 Ingrid

  • 15 years ago

    by Daisy if you do

    I really enjoy reading this loop poetry. You do such a wonderful job of maintaining the readers interest in the looping aspect. Great job my dear.

  • 15 years ago

    by Courageous Dreamer

    Outstanding job! I dont know why but I've always found this type of poetry hard to write because of the repetition of words.. yet you did a wonderful job describing "words" a really interesting perspective and thoughts. Flowed beautifully.

    5/5.

  • 15 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    See i told you in one of my comment....you could play with words so easily...awesome job once again... :)

    Seems like a very tough pattern but then all patterns are hard for me.

    all the best and take care