Humm I liked this.
It was diffrent from all those
That I have read but diffrent is awesome.
I liked this alot!
Great job.
Loved it.
Not much to say other then WOW!
5/5
Take care
-Kortney

I really like how each line is like a line of certainty, followed by uncertainty. And its consistant which is nice. My only thoughts to improve would be the grammer, such as i to I and a comma after rush. Also the lines in the last stanza (the ones with "certainty") seem to be a bit less developed than the "certain" lines int he first stanza.