This made me tear up a little. it is so vivid and amazingly worded...

Heyy this is great i love it! do u mind if i put this on mi bebo and tagged i will say who its by and everything.

Wow this is really good and u can tell its rooted in real feelings and passion um your flow was a little off but the power makees up for it its really really good BRAVO!

5/5 girl!! nice work!! keep it up!!

Awh seems like some one is in love over here, very nice written. 5/5