Wow this poem/song really stood out for me. I like the comparison in both the different lifestyle of 2 people living in different continents.Yes it is so true how people's mind can be manupilated into believing what the media say. But we all know that some of the coverage is not true. I absolutely love this poem. Keep it up

Excellent Job

That was absolutly beautiful. I cry as I type. You brought out the truth in this world of lies. Told the story to those who won't tell it themselves, and those who never knew. Wonderful job, 5/5.

I love this poem.truly!!! great job.

Wow, tis is asolutely amazing. the emotion is so harsh (if that makes sense.) It's absolutely perfect. My favorite line;

"The bullet in my baby brother"

Wow, there's such emotion in those llittle words. It's such a sad poem. But amazing job on writing it. I almost cried.

Soda E>

Very good write, much respect.

A very strong piece... with a powerful message that has came straight from your heart. You expressed yourself well...Lol. Very well done!

Take care, and very best wishes...
Olwin.

That is a song by outlandish, am I right ?!
Because the comments don't give me that impression :)

I like it both ways ^^