Very god poem, i really liked reading this. keep it up. Shanik

Amazing poem!
It had an unexpected, but very good, ending!
5/5

Amazing poem great ending and wonderful start and awesome in between lol =]

keep up the good work! 5/5

That was great. i have felt like that at times so i really enjoyed it.

This poem touched me to the core! A very wellwritten touching poem. Extremely well done... I loved it. 5/5!

Wow! Great poem! I loved it!! Keep it up! :)

Good poem about self-realisation, never forgetting that God is in control. a reminder that we are nothing without him.

Our Lord in Heaven is the best love we can ever feel.. Great job... I liked your flow and that you were talking about our heavenly father...you got a 5/5