Wow Awda, you have really impressed me with this piece. I like the tone of the poem that you have set. I can feel your anger towards all those who support violence.

the badge of tranquility migrated
left a broken pledge and a pleading mistaken
Bombs fell like a lighting stars
Deceived our wishes and shattered our hearts...

^^^ this stanza really stood out for me...It paints claer images in my head esp the 3rd line...the 4th line... yeah i can feel how those victims feel having wishes that couln't be fulfilled

I must say that this must be one of your best piece to date.I'm really impressed with this piece.Ohh and not forgetting the ending was great. Yeah I totally agree with you that we need to give peace a chance

Excellent Job

I really like the message behind this, i think more people should read this and realise that war cannot solve anything, people and nations should give peace a chance. Good work.